Desolations

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Desolations

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Hey, Newgrounds world!

I'm Genecros, and this is my first submission. This is also the first song I ever created using FL Studio 10. Please let me know how I did, and what I can improve on. This song took me quite a while, but I think that the end product was well worth it. What do you say? I made this song with a fallen ancient civilization in mind. It just sounds to me like something that would be played in a movie after the fall of some great city or something, I think. Again, this is my first try with FL Studio at all, so there are a lot of things I have yet to explore.

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Troisnyx

2012-06-07 04:35:12

Okay, here's my 2p for this piece:

1) Your chords are alright, I smiled at some of them. :D They were good!
2) Some of the synths are overpowering, and one of them is off-beat.
3) The percussions in this piece are quite alright too. : )
4) The ending was abrupt.

Now with trance, your goal is to make people get lost in the music. I didn't get that wow factor, and that's what makes me dock a few points out of this piece. Good trance pieces have that factor in them, and they also make use of dynamic changes at some points in time to build tension. I do not know if I can say much about the dynamic levels, but hey. Knock out the kinks, work on what makes this piece special, and you'll be on your way.