I thought it was very catchy! I never watched the show, but I liked the song very much! Great job!
Bad to say
The voice hid behind the music at points, which is horrible.
From a Xenosaga fan standing, this song sounded like you snatched up a midi, and re- in instrumented it.
The whole thing needs major equalizing. The intrumentals and vocals ESPECIALLY.
This song feels like it wants to break into a full dance beat with your synths.
You should study up on transistions and equalization, they both require changing.
Thanks, I really appreciate your advice. I am still trying to get better at mixing/mastering. I mixed this with headphones earlier (I know bad idea) but I updated the song after mixing with my studio monitors (noone is home alright!). Hopefully it won't sound as bad as before. And no, this was not a midi rip. I am a piano arranger and I wouldn't dare do that. Links to the original is included for anyone else who is interested in hearing the original. :D
I'll keep doing my best to improve.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.