Try a synthesizer instead of a piano.
Plus, More wubwub.
Hahaha yeah next time. I was going for a traditional metal song but definately next time I'll just go mental.
Keep it up
Frankly I love the move. HEavy and hard hitting, just like when we were kids. Before there was I. Maide and Metallica there was passion. I hear this in you. Amazing endeavors. Keep it up!!!
Thank you very much, I put all my main influences aside for this song. I appreciate your comment, it means a lot to me to hear someone likes my song.