Honestly, i don't see the remake in this. This sounds just like the original version of Dearly Beloved by Yoko Shimomura. And, in regards to your Comments on it, the world's not a patch of flowers, although you'd like positive feedback, most times you're gonna get some harsh negative criticism, which quite frankly is the best kind. 5/10 because it's still Shimomura goodness.
Remaking it so that it sounds like the original, yes.
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