I can see why you're calling it a prototype... I think you're trying to put too much into that song, there are quite a few different 'styles' there, but it seems you cannot really decide on which you want to focus.
Overall I like the song but I feel it is still a bit unfinished. Keep going though! :)
Creepy and cool
This is a fun song in a dark kind of way. The beginning part with the creepy sounds reminded me of SHODAN from System Shock 2, what with the stuttering and overarching creepiness. Excellent work on this one.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.