First of all, the percussion is really crisp, I love that.
And that offbeat basspluck sounds great, the lead pluck was nice!
Then that vocal-like sound was also really awesome, it was simple, but you really brought it out nicely.
Now I do think that in the breakdown the melody doesn't stand strong without a metronome. The main melody is rather vague when you don't hear any other instrumentation. Perhaps you should put in something simple, like a clap or a hat, but If you want to keep the atmosphere like that, you might wanna change the melody rythmically, so it's nice and easy to listen to in the breakdown.
Anyway, I loved it, sounded really crisp. It could just use something at the breakdown.
Thanks for the review! I am still working on the track and i definately want to change up the breakdown and the beat after the breakdown sucks, so i need to find some epic way to make a transition in to a nice high energy beat.!