The piano is fantastic. What also makes this song is your good melody. This would be great with vocals.
One thing though, regarding eq'ing, like most Newgrounds music, the bass isn't thick enough. You could probably fix this by applying Parametric EQ 2 (assuming you're using FL Studio), and pump up the bass a bit, as well as tweaking the other freq.
the bass isn't up high enough? damn you, shitty while still amazing at the same time bassboosting headphones from pioneer! raagh!
on a serious not though, I would tend to agree with you. this was in fact not made to be a bass-heavy song, but I feel what you meen now that I took of my headphones XD I really got to remember that it isn't the amazing quality that it is on my computer.... yeah..
also, I do have vocals. I am preparing to record them soon, but I need to get all of them written first.
great review! btw I do use Fl studio.. how could you tell? or is that ust an assumption made on NG nowadays?
gonna update this pretty soon though, so if you wanna check that one out, it will have more bass.
This is a pretty ill track, loving the piano so far!
Although i would consider including some kind of other sounds in there. the piano is prominent, but tnot really diggin the saw. Mes with a softer bassline, and if the saw lead is going to play try pulling back on the piano a bit =]
I don't know, would that make it better? this was originally going to be faster, but I decided against it so I could make lyrics better :D If you have any ideas for me for lyrics, that would be great :D.
so I need that synth in there, I just need it! so what should it be? sine? triangle? square? hybrid? I don't know what would sound good since those things you didn't like are what I thought made it my style and different... but I could try that :D
I also thought that the piano should be brought out over dominance if they played at the same time? PM me
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