You're intro is nice, but extremely misleading as to what is going to happen in the song. Some of your riffs are pretty cool, but you have THE MOST dry club drum kit I've ever heard.
I really don't like this. I don't feel like it flows well.
Also, the sudden volume change is deffiniately not needed and redundant. You're Hz is killing me in the second half of the song as well.
Just thought you'd like a musicians opinion.