is quite beautiful
very calming even though its fast paced
my only issue is the piano what it sounds like
it comes in at the beginning after the flute
when the song starts to pick up i think you should change up the notes a bit its to loud to be as repetitive as it is in my personal opinion
other then that its a great song
i specifically liked the builds
Thank you for your review, i'll try to improve on those things if I can, and possibly reupload later with the result. I do thank you for the time you took to review and listen to the song.
Thanks again ^_^,
This turned out nice, hasn't it?? I really like this man. I'd say instead of miscellaneous, put it into the Drum 'n' bass, even though it needs more bass. But the drums make it DnB for sure!
At the beginning I said "Ok, weird, but I'll keep goin' with it." Which I'm glad I did. I heard the piano & I was "Wow, heartwarming combo right there." So you got points there & the synths came in and some drums & I was like "Sweet, getting better for sure." Then the rest on I was ecstatic.
Your main melody is very good & original. This is certainly a different style of combo's I don't normally hear in Electronic music. This reminds me of a song called Streamline by Newton, at least the beginning part does (if you haven't heard it, you should. It's great)!
Your piano is what really makes the title correct. It has this aroma feel to it where it's just like "awesomeness." The beggining was probably the best part hearing it cuz the flute & piano made such a great combo deal & it sounded so light & fluid, but reminds me of a person walkin' through a rose garden or somethin' and then when the song comes in faster, they turn all super and just run through destiny, in which they face many challenges, but only to see their true love.
Your chord progression is nice!!! I don't know how much time this took you, but you defintely pulled it off to make it sound perfect. & I love that synth for the break at 2:24.
My only problem is that your transitiong seemed just a little awkward. It's so nice & calm, then you have a synth and some drums, then they go away, & then the sudden speed-up just kinda came in, ya kno?? I think the speed-up could've been slower & it still wouldn't have been really that repetitive cuz hearing this song, you could pull out a slower speed-up.
Either then that, the song overall, is fantastic!!! Nice atmosphere, transition, & variation indeed!!! Nice job :D
Thank you for that well thought out review, and it was very constructive to the point that I know what I should improve on, and what to add. I will have to give Streamline a listen though. Also, the song took me about nearly 48 hours, on and off thatis. Mainly all this morning to finish, and voila, you get the result of it.
Thanks again for your review,
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.