Yo dawg this perty good!
You have some sweet sounds here with good energy (lol) and nice changes! Since the song is only like 2 minutes there really isn't a huge desire to have massive changes but trust me it never hurts. The only thing I could really complain about is that the mastering doesn't actually let the basses fly through very much, they feel a little restricted like the mids are doing more for the basses than any of the lows (maybe you could do a sub bass with really low notes along with the regular bass, a trick I thought to use back in my song Countdown). But otherwise this is an awesome song! Keep making music and you'll totally get better! :D
sweet thanks i would have never thought of that i couldnt figure out why my bass felt so weak ill try the tip in future songs. again thanks