The suspense it held quite nice but I think at 0:40 when the flute first comes in you could have the strings boom in sound a bit for effect and maybe get a lower note change for added mood. Keep it up!
I think your right, that does feel a little dried at that part. I'll mess around abit and see. Thanks for your commennt.
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