I like the melodies, they're inventive. There are still some things missing though.
The whole song feels like a giant loop. It's be best if you try to give it some structure, try some more and different synths and melodies, different parts in the song, like 'intro, chorus, midsection, breakdown, chorus, outro'.
You could also work on the instrumentation some more. The sidechain is a little too heavy, there's not much more to be heard then the kick and a bit of the melody. I do hear some hihats every now and then, but it's too soft too actually participate in the song. Also, try to make the song more intense at some points by placing a clap on every 2nd and 4th kick.
The last thing that could be improved is a bassline. It would be nice if you place a nice and not too complex bass pattern in your songs.
Anyway, I love the melody, and the sidechained kick sounds cool, but it's just too repetitive. Keep it up man!
mad a few revisions. thanks for the input!
this is the kinda shit you fight to. I'ma play this at my dojo at my next sparing match