Just read sfzacheriah's comment. Your songs still bleed stories. Fantabulous.
Rating 8 'till life clears up, and you can come back and finish it the way you wanted to!
If this is what you call unfinished then the finished one is gonna blow me thru time. I'm gonna make your music the my official go to music when i leave for the army. always make me feels so good no matter what mood i'm in.
One more time....Matrix System...Online
This line should be familiar to you, man. Your timing seems to be spot on with the current inspiration I have in mind as of late, that being the man-machine anomaly, Matrix. Final battle, hero is down, he has to get himself back up, but he is human. The system upon his bionic arm is no more, and yet, he has to fight. Noone but him knows the system more than he does, and it being in enemy hands doesn't matter to him. His bionic eye flickers, pain coursing through the human parts of his body as the cybernetic arm and leg refuse to move, but he does so, dragging the foot to keep going forward. Finally, an explosion hits right in from of him. He is grounded by the blast, on his back, wincing, breathless, but he does not give up. Getting up, he takes a deep breath and speaks low.
"C'mon....just one more time....Matrix System....Online"
thought the stronger drums could've used more intense variation like the at start but the part where you just gated everything on the 4 was ridiculously class!
i kinda went in this vein for my entry but on the more aggressive end of the idm/drillnbass spectrum. i'm guessing the unfinishedness is where the synth is all gated, feels like the drums could've gone over this but it has this gorgeous ethereal vibe without drums so if you cut it off at ~ 3:13 you could theoretically call it a day!
Love it, talentttttt. :P
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.