I actually do like the song bro... the melody is just perfect except for that one base at 00:32- 00:36 that was really out of sorts...the rest is amazing now if you would just add lyrics it would be ultimate!
Sounds very unprofessional
The composition is nice. I really like the melody and backing track.
However, the mix is terrible. It all actually sounds horrible. It reminds me a lot of a midi sequencer playing some notes. That´s absolutely not the sound you´re looking for. Try finding some better sounds and samples. Especially the bass souds terrible (at 0:36). The intro sounds ok, but the rest is "meh". Even if you can't find better samples, you can use effects to make it sound right. Try some EQ and reverb.
So i'd remake the track with better samples and effects. That would really benifit this track.
Yeah I know but this was with my old software which didn't allow much. I have FL Studio 10 so once I get around to remaking this remix I will tell you.