sry man, but this track is overrated. the entire melody IS a z3ta patch without any hearable changes. you put a pretty neat break on that, but it sounds like lo-fi, and unmastered. the kicks are clipping, the snare doesn't have range, and there is some holes too. the i cannot hear any bass, or pads, or fx's, or anything else than the melody.
for the future: listen to a LOT of different music, and try to find why are you like them! then try to "copy" every single melody, sound from them and put them together. and if you are satisfied with the results, then you will realize that what is your style and what is missing from this track.
i hope i can helped you in some way, so cheer up, and continue!
sounds A LOT like endless space by solus lunes
funny fact:i have never heard endless space
not bad i liked it. isn't that main synth from z3ta?
Reminds me of the prodigy
meets For Great Justice!. I really like this. My only gripe is the kick. It seems a bit overpowering.
i'll fix that in v.2
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.