Terrible

You just put a lot of parts from other people and threw that in a song. This isn't a problem if you're mixing some tracks. but you just did it totally wrong. This does't sound like a song, but some sounds thrown out on the street and recollected by some weird guy who doesn't know what to do with it.

You threw some parts of yourself in too. But that isn;t a song either. Many things sound off. Nothing fits together. It just could be like 20 WIPS of 20 sec which you threw together in one terrible song.

Besides that, uou didn't put any effort in mixing it.

Just try working out 1 idea next time. Don't use other peoples songs. And you have to make the song keep flowing during the whole time. This is essential in making a good song. Some adjustments is often better then just restarting with a whole new piece of music. Good luck with your next song.

Overall,
2/10
1/5

Hmmm

Using entire clips of other people's songs isn't cool. If you really want to use the melody of another song, remake it yourself as best you can, but never do what you did in the beginning of this song. Even though you did give credit, which is good, you can't just cut whole sections out of other songs and throw them into your own work. It's always best to create your own music with your own tools, from your own ideas.

The rest of the song is your own creation, and that's good. I can tell that you are new to creating music; there is no structure or melody to this song, and a good song needs both. Your drum work is good, and you used a good variety of synths, but the song just drones on randomly with no direction.

This doesn't mean that it is an awful song or that you are an awful artist. Like I said, I can tell that you're more or less new to this. Keep making music. Make a shorter song, with a melody that is pleasant to listen to. Use different effects on your synth, like reverbs and delays and filters. Try to include an intro, body, and outro.

I will give you 5 stars for the effort. I know that you probably didn't know that there is a problem with using other people's music like that when you made this, so don't feel bad. Just don't do it in the future. Continue to make up your on music, but put lots of effort into it!

It's pretty cool

It's a good song, like the beginning, but to me there just isn't enough. No big 'climax,' to say.