I love the story. I envisioned it perfectly in my head as the song played too. You've got great musical talent and know how to dig deep into a persons' emotions with each different instrument. If you live in New Jersey I'd be more than happy to help you make this epic song into some sort of action film along with S-Ops who can do the 3D stuff.
thank you! i love it to create stories, i also write but in italian for now. That's where i live XD
Though the story seems terminator-ish but I like it. The song is good too. I would like to see this picked up and turn into a little visual movie. If 3d modeling is involved, I'm your man.
i think we should talk via pm! thx for your review
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.