i rarly review music but first time for everything i guess and u asked for it :P so yea i think its to cludderd almost like u sat down and pressed random crap. im not sayin u suck at all just sayin try thinin it out and such. ull have a better track thats just my point of view
keep tryin and ull make it :)
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