wow

this is a good tune to listen too, if you want your ears to bleed. you need to work on actual trance, trance is fast paced, hevy bass, not low monotone piccolo slow pitched son that's only 42 sec long song. sorry to say this but i think it's time to hang up your music making for now and take some classes to make music first.

Not trance.

Well, it nearly made me fall into a trance, but this isn't trance -music-.

OMFG

awsume
it made me fucking cry, u see!!?? IM FUCKING CRYING RITE NOW AND ITS ALL UR FAULT, DAMN
its a sad, sad day

erm....

its okay... the piccolo should be played better, and for that matter, u should
use one thats not so low pitch. Also throw in a few mor instruments.

why ?

why would you post this thank you for wasting a minut of my life