once again kinda good man but
tha only problem iz tha sound of tha guitar... soundz like u playin underwater or sum shit... needz 2 b clearer... but like i said for "purp haz2"... u got skill keep it up... n if ya cant play it clearer... use smaller cordz i guess... could work ?... ez chief.
just take the annoying toc toc sound out. it sounds really out of place with the low guitar that makes it sound like drum n' bass. replace it with some staccato string ensemble chords in a minor key, or something discreet, or take them out completely for a more subtle loop. nice start.
Thanx for the review, I really appreciate that you took the time to write me something about my song, thank you.