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The samples were awesome! The accurately portray the mood that you were shooting for from the start. Definitely has that dead and decaying feel to it.
0:35 when the staccato strings come in. I don't think this melody fits with the rest of the song. It doesn't add to the creepy feel very well. Perhaps you could have saved the theme for later, or simply skip this part.
0:55 much better melody selection for the track. This adds very well to both the creepy and the RPG feel.
1:12 I love the piano that you bring into the song at this point. However, I think you could have added some high notes on the piano in addition to the high notes that you used with the bell.
One other thing: the background sample, although excellently mixed, does get repetitive after 2 mins of continuous playback. I think you could have it fade in and out at certain parts, apply various other effects to it, or perhaps layer more samples on top.
Overall, excellent job here!
Pretty much the same thing I listened to already though, I still really think this could complement a game or flash animation really well though! Maybe you should try asking around, and see if any animators are looking for music submissions?
Thanks for sharing this awesome work with the community I hope the best of luck to you on journey into professional music composition :)
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Well I have really got to say is that it is pretty much the same as the other except with a voice clip added. Apply everything I said in the last review to the same thing here and it is the same. Only that creepier voice has been added. Pretty good still anyways, not bad.
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Yep. The only main thing added was the voice in this one. It wasn't wanted in the original request, and some people liked it, so I uploaded both.
Actually though, if you listen closely, I added an echo to the whispers. :P
I really like this
This seems like it would be perfect for a Luigi's Mansion-esque section of a game, like a big creepy mansion or tomb or something. Good work!
Thanks! Wish the zerobombers would lay off (for once), though I guess because of it I have more of a chance to get a high rating by the time it gets into the ratings. They won't notice until it's back up there. lol.
It's designed to be creepy, to have an eerie nature, which is why I have it in tritones and minor keys throughout, centered around B.
Glad you like it!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.