Not too shabby for a first try.
Knoxkast Radio! OMG I thought I recognized it... anyway, pretty funny. I'll be generous this time since it's only your first attempt. Rooms for improvement: get a better sketch to cover from. Maybe something from Mitchell and Webb? Their radio show is hilarious. Maybe a better mic as well, and try and clear your throat more before each recording. Anyway, hope to see more soon, and hopefully the quality will have improved a bit!
I'll be getting a new microphone soon, and I had a cold at the time of recording. I love Mitchell and Webb! I was actually thinking about covering one of their sketches for my next submission.
Thanks for the advice!
The whole BOIL WATER ALERT has got a south park exaggerated tone to it that makes it funny. Your voice however is kinda plain. The boil water alert announcer voice is good but the rest lack any discernible difference from your regular voice. Prob could use a thicker better accent for the one and the rest just need more drama and enunciation.
sounds like the drunk and on drugs comedy hour voice from the commercial
and a little bit of Montey Python plus the innocence of sesame street
8/10 just cause i liked it:D keep it up