Not bad, but Mixing needs work.
1. You have a decent build up.
My problems with this song:
1. The mixing needs work. especiall starting at 0:41. The bass is overshadows the drumline alot in this song. I recommend turning down the bass some, and watch your master. This is my major problem with this song though.
Overall, this song has potential, but the mixing needs alot of work.
Yeh. I didn't bother mixing it much, I'm lazy. All it really needs is a louder bassdrum, snare's not very important IMO.