i do most of my stuff in a day as well.
I just try my best to avoid repetition. i guess that's why i also tend to avoid making a lot of house music, too. You should look into some other kind of piano. Sounds like FL Keys to me, but who knows. Find some soundfonts if your software supports it.
No way to deny or apologize about sounding like a dick in this review, so sorry for that.
It's ok to be like that, I will accept all negative comments, negative comments help me to improve ^-^
The intro was too long. The lack of a significant buildup keeps it from having any kind of "rager" effect that most dance music has. The scratch effects etc. also really threw off the rhythm and for me would be very difficult to dance to. Then again I tend to specialize in Cwalking, Krumping and freestyling than just waving my arms in the air so maybe I'm wrong there. All in all, it has a lot of room for improvement if you're willing to invest the effort. But as it is right now, it has a way to go before I'd consider it "good".
Thank you for your advice, I will make better music next time :D
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