Not a bad melody but as already stated it does get repetitive and the snare at 0:35 i think should be changed. Don't think it fits too well. Throw in a few change ups and maybe a few more instruments and this could be something better. Keep working at it!
Ya, I wasn't to sure on how to change it up so I stopped it before i could mess it up any further XD
plus, like I said, it was mainly just a sound test `=D
I love celestial, and it's a great unique lead. It sounds pleasant to me as well, though this song gets repetitive. Even so, you can't go wrong with the instrument, so overall a 9/10 and 5/5. Great work!
I've never used celestial before this and i thought i should try it out XD
I wasn't to sure on how to change it up and continue, so i stopped it there before it got over repetative =)