I vote for the original, sounds more nostalgic
I think the original sounds more nostalgic. It sounds like you changed the instrument used as well, which is part of what I don't like. And there are noises that sound like a storm in the background in the original too. So I vote for the original. In any case, if others like this better I am glad that you put it up, but I am still glad the other version exists because I like it much more.