I do not like being overly critical of musicians here because I feel bad about leaving harsh reviews but here goes:
The chords are decent but the melody isn't exactly consistent. The lyrics are completely incomprehensible due to the excessive use of autotune, it's like you were making them up as you went along.
After reading the lyrics along with the song, the experience is even worse. I know you meant well but that is some of the corniest sht ever written. You can argue with me and say "well, why does it have a high score/download count if it's so bad" and my answer would be that you uploaded this 2 years ago and are probably 5'ing it daily.
My suggestion would be to check out older artists like Luthor Vandross, Ronald Isley and even R.Kelly and see how they write ballads. Study them, take notes, don't be afraid to be inspired. I hope this wasn't too harsh.
nice , but this song really need a rapper ;) , & your voice is not loud enough :) , keep going mate :)
Excellent song! Liked the Bilingualism; adds a nice touch... Only suggestion would be to use a little less electronic distortion on the voice, mate. Great ending, and loved the piano overtones. She should love you even more for this though.
I like this one i think she would like to hear it
She should be loving you forever after this one! I guess I don't know what dubstep is...this is just nice music. Wish some of the lyrics were a little more unique. But this is great...keep it up!
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