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Lilly (J.A.C.)

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Author Comments

This is a complete song I made for my gf. I tried mixing dubstep elements with some jazzy-ambient sound. Hope you guys/gals like it! My voice is not the best but I tried haha. Lyrics are simplistic and that's the best way IMO to get a message across. Anyway FEEL FREE to leave comments!!

Lyrics:

Lilly
You are, the one I want
And It feels so good
To be, with you

What is it about you
That has me so into you
Sera tu belleza
O tu forma de ser
_________________

Desde la primera vez
Que yo te vi
Your eyes and your face
Mesmerized me

Lilly
You're my girl
And you're my world
I'll always be there for you
No matter how far
Or what comes our way
I will never change

Reviews


I do not like being overly critical of musicians here because I feel bad about leaving harsh reviews but here goes:

The chords are decent but the melody isn't exactly consistent. The lyrics are completely incomprehensible due to the excessive use of autotune, it's like you were making them up as you went along.

After reading the lyrics along with the song, the experience is even worse. I know you meant well but that is some of the corniest sht ever written. You can argue with me and say "well, why does it have a high score/download count if it's so bad" and my answer would be that you uploaded this 2 years ago and are probably 5'ing it daily.

My suggestion would be to check out older artists like Luthor Vandross, Ronald Isley and even R.Kelly and see how they write ballads. Study them, take notes, don't be afraid to be inspired. I hope this wasn't too harsh.



nice , but this song really need a rapper ;) , & your voice is not loud enough :) , keep going mate :)



Excellent song! Liked the Bilingualism; adds a nice touch... Only suggestion would be to use a little less electronic distortion on the voice, mate. Great ending, and loved the piano overtones. She should love you even more for this though.



NICE

I like this one i think she would like to hear it



Wonderful!

She should be loving you forever after this one! I guess I don't know what dubstep is...this is just nice music. Wish some of the lyrics were a little more unique. But this is great...keep it up!


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Credits & Info


Listens
3,473
Downloads
137
Votes
364
Score
4.57 / 5.00

Uploaded
Aug 5, 2011
8:10 AM EDT
Genre
R&B
File Info
Song
4.4 MB
3 min 50 sec
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Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.