It's a great composition and idea and from the sound of your voice u sound much older than 6 or 7 so that must've been a long time you were working on it. As an idea itself its pretty good and recording qual seems to be good- no buzzing sound or mystery noise. But of course it is not flawless. It could use some more editing to be more flowing and smooth but that's really not too hard to do though. I like it overall however! I downloaded to listen later! Hey could you post the lyrics in the Author's Comments box sometime? When you do you should send me a message so I know when to come back. Sounds like the lyrics tell a story but for some reason I just cant tell what about, but I do get a really sad feeling by whats said at the end.
Great work I think I might keep up with your work.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.