Good! Could use improvement though
I love the lyrics and guitar! A few notes though, 1) no drums?! even just something reallyyy simple, just using some simple drum sequencing pattern would give this track so much more depth. And 2) the vocals are a little rough. I know, no one on Newgrounds is a professional singer or anything, and I know the effect layered over your vocals are for an added effect (which I actually like the sound of) but maybe you could clean up the vocals a little? I'm not saying auto-tune it or something, but if you just rerecord the vocals and pay extra attention to detail, it could be wayy better. overall, really great track though! if this is just a demo, you should inbox me when you release the final version so i can hear it :D Great job :)
Thanks man, yeah i know its pretty rough but had to record the vocals on audacity and do each part separately. But we're looking for a drummer and i'll hopefully have a finished version up in the next week. Thanks for the feedback and i'll definitely let you know when i put up the finished product.