Some things that I could say about this song would be the arpeggios. If you listen to my very first songs they sound similar. Though you got to get over using presets like those arps. There needs to have some uplift with your songs as well, judging that there is no transitions between sounds. It almost seems that there are no automations what-so-ever. Try focusing on making: Bass, Melody, Lead, and some kind of atmosphere for your songs. I say this because by the sound of what you're creating here, it sounds as if your striving for techno/trance. This would be my flat out general guess.
~With good intentions, David
I have been trying to make a techno trance and a bit of club, however I seem to fall short, I know what you mean by using the presets but I have a very limited amount of knowledge on how to create my own sounds, and I have very very limited amount of knowledge on using synths which I really want to use thank you for your sharing your knowledge to me
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.