My thoughts on this one --
1. It's quite short, and as much as I know it's 12-bar blues, I would really love to see this built up further as a standalone piece.
2. I love easy listening, and this was a good listen. Cheered me up even! :D
3. I have some qualms about the piano at around 0:09: it does sound a tad messy on the right hand.
4. Is everything at the same tempo? I somehow feel a slight slowdown at the end (tempo envelopes?) might help -- the ending isn't so abrupt now, but it could be made even less so.
Now TBH, I have no idea why this was voted down so much... I enjoyed this piece a lot, kinks or no kinks. Thanks for sharing!