this should win
this should win
The breakbeat beat is SIIIIIICK, bro. I love how it sounds so fast-paced and yet the track doesn't at all; that contrast is absolutely brilliant. I also love the glitchy main part starting at 1:19, it really has this dubstep/DnB feel to it, but then again it doesn't. All in all, this song is so weird that it's amazing.
And now for something else: I noticed that in the intro, you used a lot of dissonance in the piano. I'm pretty sure this was your intention, but I have a meh-ish feeling about it, it sounds a bit too disturbing if you know what I mean. This might be because we have a different taste of course, as a house-producer I barely use dissonance, so that's why I always get the shivers when I hear it. :P
Also, the vocals fitted in greatly. I could understand them, but that was only because I read them as I heard them. The first time I listened to this track I didn't read them and I could barely make anything out. I think this is because you're talking a bit too fast and the vocals are pitcheda tad too low. If you'd change those things I think the vocals would be more clear.
This song is starnge, but also a freaking killer. Well done! :)
5/5, 9/10, faved
Could you return the favor on my latest song? (from what I've read/heard you're a pretty good reviewer so yeah :P)
Ar, deffinatly. Thanks for taking the time to write up a nice review. I'm a big fan of nonharmonic chords so dissonance is typically key in my music.
Simply WOW man!!
You've definitely come a long way from that D&B artist wanna be kid, this ismind blowing, I can't really think of anything to say since this is not quite my area (and since I feel like half mah brain is missing XD), but I'm just gonna say GREAT WORK!
And definitely keep it up, this is your thing man!
lol, dnb artist wanna be kid. We all have to start somewhere, right?
This is different. I really like the title, it matches. I loooove the percussion. Mixed/mastered in here perfectly. And I'm digging that dissonant/atonal piano. It actually adds a really nice and fitting atmosphere.
Good job man!
thanks for stopping by nate. it means a lot to me coming from you :)
I go away for a while and come back and what do I see...a shit tone of new songs by you....and....um i love this one....but the vocals are too loud in my opinion....or maybe i turned the volume up a bit more then im suppost to xD....other then that....luv it <3
Vocals too loud? Damn, I wanted to make them coherent and was afraid they were too quite. I'll promptly do something about them if one of the next few people that review this song says something about this issue...
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