That was actually, like, really good. I'm super impressed. Way better then any of the crap I came up with at 16. Catchy. Good instrumentation. I like the gang vocals in the chorus a lot, it worked really well. I know I'm repeating myself, but it's impressive. I would be honored to be in any of you bands, sir.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.