NICE. I <3 those formant (talking) wobbles!
The intro was ear candy, I will admit! The only problem is that you need a heavier bass and kick and snare, and your formant wobble needs to be louder. Add some reverb to the Formant wobble. More defined drums would be nice. Maybe some smoother transitions and a cleaner ending. Also that lead instrument at 0:21 needs to louder and heavier. 8/10 4/5