Pretty decent actually.

You shouldn't be focused on beats to rap over though. You've got a pretty rad instrumental sound. It's lo fi and focused. It's good.

If this is your first

Than why did you stop?? its beautifull. i like the drums. i dont like the techno effect. but the choir at 45 seconds in is a good touch. the piano is amazing.. realy good for your first hip hop beet. i think you will make a wonderfull producer if you take time in actully building your art work.