1. Composed really well. I didn't expect this to sound like this. I thought it was gonna be a joke song with lyrics and how much you hate it. Either that, or some kind of heavy metal song. It kinda sounds like a calm ending theme to a show.
2. 3:00. This is the first change that I have noticed throughout this song.
My problems with this song:
1. Too repetitive. I know 2 ways to fix that. Either shorten the song, or make more changes to it.
overall this is a really good song, but its too repetitive.
Keep it up.
Thank you very much!! Yes, I need to start working on my songs to make them less repetitive. I've been listening to a lot of Imogen Heap and I like what she does with them.
The thing is I usually just make an idea and have a bunch of layers on top of it, and it loops 4 or 8 bars... then I end up just bringing in and out different tracks but not making new sections to the song chordally. I appreciate your feedback, thanks!