This peice was ok
This was ok. The synth that you have enter in gives the peice a harsh feeling wich contrast to the soft feeling that you gave earlier in the piece with piano. Maybe if you switched to maybe a softer sounding instument that may help. Overall in thepiece i feel as though their is a sense of emptyness or incomplete. In short i feel as though something is missing to make this piece sound better. I dont know if the feeling of emptyness is what this peice is supposed to portray, If so that it does a good job of it. Again a ok peice just needs a little work.
Ok, it sounded ALRIGHT until that obnoxiously loud synth came in. I'm assuming this is supposed to be Astro Man? When you say "just in case anyone wants it in a flash," sorry dude, this will never be used in a flash, unless it was by some 5 year old who just learned it, but there's a lot of shit flashers on NG so you just might get used. But man, this is horrible... why no drums again?
Fuck You, again, you dont HAVE to listen to me if im SO HORRIBLE. DAmm