Pretty Damn Close
I really like the overall work. You designed a pretty solid hardstyle track and it's got perfect qualities as far as what you look for in a hardstyle track. The only thing I would say that doesn't give it the climax that I would be looking for, per se, is the synths at the climax. I'd get some harder synths - the ones you use seem to trancy for me. Always remember too: Hard BASS! lol
If you want check out my news track I'm Shufflin. Not hardstyle but definitely EDM.