I think the clap should be turned out a little bit, and really of the percussion in general. I cant even hear the bass drum, let alone feel it :P The build-up at 1:06 was sweet! At 2:10, I would add some type of oriental sound/filler over the piano, and 2:22 I would turn up the harps (a lot!). Upon my first listen (around a week ago), I didn't like it for some reason, but it was a lot more enjoyable the second time around. It has plenty of twists and turns to keep me interested. I'd say your time was well spent making this song. I enjoyed it very much! This should definitely be in a game!
Thanks dude Im glad you took the time to listen to this and my other song, it means a lot! And it means even more than you actually gave feedback and even moreso that you enjoyed the song! Haha thank you man, I'll try to work harder in the future