A few words
First I must say that I'm really enjoying the theme that you're shooting for in this song. It is indeed very light and airy. Couple of things I wanna say though.
First, I feel as if you are dramatically restricting the potential of the piano by leaving in a simple 4 note chord pattern. As a light an airy song, I feel that the piano is essential to the feeling that you arr trying to capture. There is so much you can do with a piano, not just in this song, but in any song.
Second, more of a side point. This sound more like trance than dance to me. I dunno if that's just your style, but I'm just saying. Dance drives people to..well ..dance. this is more of a relaxant than a stimulant to me. Doesn't mean that it's not a good song, just that it's perhaps in the wrong genre.
Keep up the awesomeness!
Yeah i sometimes limit myself when it comes to variation, because i start making things and then i just loop them, and then i forget about them... i should def work on that..
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