Good beat, repetitive.
I like the sound of the melody mixed in with the beat, but you could have had a stronger beat and lengthened the melody. Otherwise, great song!
The melody was supposed to maintain its similar sturcutre throughout the song, but I guess I didn't do it well enough. I fully agree about the weak beat, so I'll try to work up on the drums in my future songs.
Thanks for dropping me a review.