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Fatal Destiny - Marifax

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It seems the shorter i work on something, the better the outcome is :). Made this song in an hour. I think this is my best song yet actually! Rate, comment and enjoy! :)


Sounded classical to start with

Oh, a very good blend is what we have here - perhaps a little short, but something that can be worked with, to really give the developers something to add to their games as they see fit. Glad to see that it loops well, also.

I think that the build up is short and a little too "boom" for a classical sounding piece - perhaps slow that down a tad, but give yourself a longer track to work with (2 minutes minimum).

The woodwind is a nice sound and it compliments the beat of the track, making it sound a little dance like and certainly good for a high fantasy race within a game, perhaps some sort of riding mini game, or even a game based entirely around this tune. Of course, with the track being so short, you'll need to add other tunes in, to stop the patrons getting bored of the same loop.

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Good blend

This actually sounds pretty cool anyways. Kind of sounds like it might work as a battle theme as well which is even better to know. The tone of the song seems to feel like an early game boss styled song I think since it feels like it would be played for an early game boss and then possibly again later in the game when you face them again after they become far more stronger than before. Very cool beat.

The flute is nice and gives a feel of calmness before the storming of the battle here. The bass is calm and I like how the notes linger for a couple of seconds before changing up. The drums are cool and I like the triplet rolling it goes out for and then the cymbal banging is cool. I liked the synth as well giving a feel of the battle getting ready to be more intense.

Overall, great boss song, great loop.

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Marifax responds:

Thanks alot, realy appreciate it :)

Nice blend of electronic instruments!

I really like that this piece is composed of all sorts of different elements, but at the same time I did find the variety of sounds to be a bit confusing; maybe you should try to pick an overall feel for your song next time, and then try to build around that theme.

Writing a song is much like writing an essay in the sense that your (Concrete Details/ sounds) should all be organized, and stay within the same topic without venturing to far out. In this case I would say that you might have ventured a bit far considering that you mixed Organs/ Oscillators/ Flutes/ Techno Beats.

- Avoid getting too crazy with sample verity
- Make sure your drums are just as powerful and unique as the rest of your instruments
- try to avoid being so repetitive

Overall though, not bad at all!

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Marifax responds:

Thanks alot for the review, realy constructive :)
This song was kinda "avant garde" i guess, mainly playing around.
I'll work on the repetitive stuff and the drums aswell.
Thanks for listening :)

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Credits & Info


3.70 / 5.00

Jul 28, 2011
9:34 AM EDT
Video Game
File Info
3.1 MB
1 min 23 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.