What is this missing?
1. The drum beat starts off simple. It kind of have this slight build up to it also.
2. The mixing is good. Everything sounds in the right volume.
My problems with this song:
1. Those bells gets pretty repetitive. The ones that last about 2/3's of the song. I liked that you dropped them at one point, but they start back with the same rhythm later on. In fact, the one rhythm could use some variations. The one that plays fast for 7 notes than slow 2 notes. If I'm not mistaken, its the glokenspel or something.
2.Something feels like it's missing. I really couldn't tell you what.
This is a song that has potential. It needs more variation in it, and something else is needed with this song.
Keep it up.
i love your reviews..all these songs are very quickly done from thoughts in my head..i dont plan anything..i just sit and start doin em..you are more than welcome to any of the flp files...shoot me your e-mail address and ill send them to you...do as u wish with them..i do this for fun only..thnx again for your reviews..