It could do with a better bassline and a little heavy bass on the sub but other than that it was a good track :)
on the sub, I have a bit of a problem I know because I don't even have a sub to master with, so I'm going all visual. I try my best to get it right without actually hearing it, but there's only so much I can do. I'm working on getting a mastering sub though, so hopefully I can finally get a correctly mastered track, lol.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.