Been waiting so many years for this to be finished. I will wait till you die, lingering in your subconscious, lightly carressing dreams you dream. I will be there. Waiting. Waiting. Lingering. Waiting. When this site becomes ash, I will vanish.
Bro, ya gotta post finished works. This is too good to get a glimpse of without hearing the whole thing. This song definitely lives up to its name.
I feel like this track isn't good enough to finish.
Finish it :)
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Keep going with this song, the piano is beautiful but like the other guy said, work on your transition.
Anyway, I can't wait till the full version comes out!
Good luck!! (:
Keep at it.
If this is a demo, i have to say i'm going to be one of those people looking forward to the completed song. You deffinitely have a great start, and the music is not only deep, but cheerful. I hope you dont get lazy like many NG users these days. Make this something that makes you proud and happy. Good luck :)
Its a good start...
You have a nice base to work off of with this. I can't help but think I've heard that kind of opening before but I can't put my finger on the song. The opening is nice but I would try to maybe carry the silence with some reverb or delay this way its not just dead silence. You might want to also work on a better transition at 1:10 where it starts getting faster. From there you just need to extend the song a bit which could be done by maybe having the piano return with its notes echoing n the back and having the song mellow out a bit. Just an idea. Keep up the good work!
Lol there is reverb AND delay on the piano.
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