This is definitely one of the better trance pieces on NG. With high quality sounds, a powerful kick, and a bitchin' bassline, you have something going on with this track, even if you aren't satisfied with the way it came out.
The only issues I can see with this track are more on the mastering and production side of things. While more a matter of personal taste, the clap/snare is unusually loud, oftentimes getting in the way of other sounds that are going on at the same time. Your individual tracks/instruments could use some more compression and EQ'ing as well to let everything sit well within each other, producing a much cleaner overall mix.
Looking forward to hearing more stuff from you.
Thanks for your review! Yeah the master came out whack, oh well. XD Hoping to fix it on the next track :D
On re-listening the clap was a little obnoxious jsut now...Darn headphones/speakers change the way it sounds when creating it haha
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.