Good Melancholic tone.
I see where you're coming from on being overlooked on here, along with several thousand others, but Chaotichism is right. While you may not get the ratings that you want, just be glad that there are people that actually listening your music. Now, I must review...
When it comes to composition and arrangement: for something that was pretty much improvised, you did a great job with that keyboard of yours. Definitely worth all that time you spent on this as it sounds sad in a good way. The only problem with this is that it feels empty, but considering the mood, it fit. The instrumentation may be like a regular piano, but that's all that this needed. Nothing else needs to be said about that. However, I think that the size of this song is a bit big for something that's three minutes long, but I won't knock you down.
-Nice arrangement for something that was improvised.
-Feels kind of empty at times, but the desolate mood alleviated it.
-Could have used a somewhat smaller filesize.
Overall: Ian, here's a ten from me and just keep going; you'll eventually have at least a few who will use your stuff in their flash.