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Jul 17, 2011 | 10:46 PM EDT
File Info
4.5 MB
3 min 54 sec
3.68 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Rated 3.68 / 5 stars
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470 Plays | 28 Downloads
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Metal, Rock - Indie

Author Comments

This is myself (vocals), my friend (guitar, bass)

First run, no edits, doing another recording in the near future.

All recording done in FL Studio, only thing messed up is had to go through pa system into laptop for vocals and that added background noise.

Let me know what you think, all feedback is much appreciated.



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars


I like your voice bro(no homo) it sounds good for a song like this. when it gets to the chorus the second time,you should get louder instead of softer. it makes for a better musical effect,a kind of contradiction.. as for the lyrics,i can relate to them,so good job on making them on a basic topic,but you kinda lost a point for doing it. try making parody songs or writing lyrics on completely random things. it will help with choosing topics for songs,instead of just the normal indie stuff like love and enjoying life. try adding drums after the first chorus as well,it would make it seem much more musically progressive. just my 2 cents. hope you liked the review,and i hope i can hear more of your voice!(once again,no homo)

7/10 3/5

Evilxy responds:

thanks for the review, I like the input, I think ill try the change on the second chorus.

This is really our first go at recording the song, will be adding drums.

I needed to do this song... Now that its down on paper and actually a song, I can move on to other stuff.

Thx again and I will definitely have more stuff up soon.