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TL - Enter the Paradise

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Author Comments

Melodic trance song I made, decided to play with a more complicated 8-chord progression. Pretty happy tune too.

Do tell me how I did, especially with mixing. Constructive feedback is welcome, as with all my songs.

Made in FL studio, with Sytrus, 3xOsc, and various samples.

Well, listen, enjoy, rate and review this song!

Reviews


this and that

now the chord variation is awesome. the drums and synths are mixed nicely. also the happy tone of the song is consistent. however, the beat of the drums is predictable. and often times in the trance genre i hear the tom and cymbal mixture around 1:40 too often.
the progression and chord variations is what i've always wanted out of a trance song! this shows extensive craftsmanship on the part of the creator! so i hope you will continue! and for the rest of us keep playing with musical theories that are new to you, it'll result in awesomeness for us all! :D


TeHLoY responds:

Thanks for this review!

I still need to improve on making beats, you're totally right about them being too predictable. The trance genre doesn't give much leg room for variety as compared to other genres like Drum and Bass, and is slightly harder to create variations in the beats. Nevertheless, I shall improve!

Chord progressions... I don't have much knowledge in music theory, so many of my songs are based on what I've heard before. This one was pretty new, but still really predictable.


amazing

Sound amazing , im feel like im gonna jumping into the ocean...

When i listen ur music its like im gonna be happy for the rest of my life !

:D (sorry for the non constructive comment but im not good for this xD)


TeHLoY responds:

Thanks!
Anyway, reviews don't need to be constructive, even simple ones like these make my day. :)


Bouncy

Has a real bouncy feel to it and reminds me of an older techno/house song I heard on an album a long time back a few years ago too. The beat sounds quite pleasing on the ears though and really cool too. Like what you did on this beat for the most part anyways, it just works.

The synth sounds incredibly pleasing, slow, and melancholy too. Then you got the second synth that plays the higher and far more rapid notes that in turn make this into a cool trance beat actually. The bass line here gets smooth and helps move the beat along as the song plays out and makes the listener feel happy to hear it.

The drums sound pretty cool and neat here as they play very fast triplet notes in rapid succession of each other.

Overall, this tune sounds really nice, great dancing or relaxing song either way though. Nice work here on this one.


TeHLoY responds:

Thanks for this review!

Yep, has a bouncy feel, that's what I intended. Not exactly the relaxing song in my view..

Appreciated for the effort in this review. XD

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Credits & Info

TeHLoY
Author

Listens
619
Downloads
52
Votes
24
Score
4.31 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jul 15, 2011
11:45 PM EDT
Genre
Trance
File Info
Song
9.7 MB
4 min 14 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.