I like the different sounds you have going and a nice drum rhythm. But everything sounds a bit messy and sometimes to sudden. At the end you make a good drop off but you should try to smooth out the changes in the song like you have at the ending. Other than that it has a good feel to it. Keep up the good work :)
If there was a collection of songs that would represent luxury and futuristic setting, it would belong in that collection!
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